Writer's Block and Contemplation · 4:44pm Oct 24th, 2019
So, as I'm sure you all may have noticed. I've hit a bit of a wall.
My writing has slowed dramatically and my poor editor is stressed to the point of pulling her hair out, so I worry terribly about adding to her stress by reminding her of the edits I need and seeking her input.
So, I'm turning to you all.
FoE; Freedom is 188 pages long (Give or take depending on font size, spacing, etc) up to the end of the 9th chapter (since it was the last to be edited).
My plan is to reread it, and make some small changes. Nothing so drastic as to rewrite whole bits. But maybe to add some details, fill in some gaps, slip in a joke or two.
I'd love for some more input from you all. What do you think about my story and writing? Good or bad? Do you see things I should improve on? Things I should change? Mistakes I've made?
Help me deliver a story you all enjoy reading.
I will make a blog post with each section I update so you can check out the changes.
Its a pretty nice story, and I am still curious about what the whole main plot is about.
The only change that I can think of is the change in the chapter lay out that I mentioned earlier, and else have polishing never hurt anyone... just try not to go total Lucas and change all of the magical aspects out with CGI
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Are you kidding me???
I just spent the last six hours building a green screen just to do that! :(