Thank you so much! <3 · 9:10am Oct 20th, 2019
Hey there, readers!
First off, I'd like to thank each and every one of you for being here. I know the amount of stories on this site rises each day and it's sometimes not easy to find a story you like. So, thank you for reading mine.
Secondly, I want to say that I've taken the criticisms and complaints that some have made and really thought about the story.
I do agree that the fight may have been slightly better a little later, and I will admit that it was planned to have a little more interaction between the Princess and Twilight, but I honestly couldn't find much to put there, considering the urgency that there would have been.
Still, I do keep that in mind going forward and there will be plenty of non-combat conflict in chapter 3 :D
As always, thanks for being here <3
Thank you for the story!
I think the fight scene wasn’t rushed at all, it depicts the urgency of the situation like you said and it’s as if we were in Twilight’s shoes, waking up in the past only to be attacked almost instantly and having to rescue Luna in the same night really feels like it’s urgent and important.