I'm sorry for talking about this again since I know I'm going to get hate for this, but because of my actions that I've repeated again after a long time ago, I've just lost a friend and now I'm starting to think that I haven't learned anything from my past actions and that all I do is hurt others and ruin their lives.
Ominous: What are we even talking about? Everybody had messed up already We threw ourselves down the void without doubt This discussion is senseless and petty
There's no question to be posed We're all evil, case closed Did you forget everything that we’ve done?
We all are beyond help And that includes myself And that's why I’ve got no choice but
Hey there, everyone. After some thinking, I've decided that, instead of trying to get my own OCs reviewed by others, I'm going to try something different and review others' OCs. It's a fun idea and I can't wait to see the OCs that others have made.
If you have any OCs that you'd like to be reviewed, please let me know and I'll tell you about my thoughts on them.
Hey there, everyone! You know? I've thinking about this idea for quite a while, but was too nervous to show it due to being not wanting to create any spoilers until it was fully realized yet. But thanks to a great friend's advice, I've decided to give it a shot to see your opinions on them so far.
In an alternate universe where the villains won, Luna is busy living a quiet life in a land far away from Equestria. But one day an old friend shows up to ask a favor of her.
Then again, this story also has comedic moments in it, most of them courtesy of Discord. My approach would be to start off dramatic, then add humorous moments and bits of dialogue before getting into more drama later on. Well, that's my approach anyway.
5131586 When it comes to making sure the comedy doesn't ruin the drama and vice-versa, it would probably be best not to go into comedy immediately after a very dramatic moment. Allow the audience time to take in the dramatic moment that just happened. And as for writing comedic moments of your own, I'm...not sure how to answer that one. Maybe have the heroes engage in a bit of banter or something like that?
Ooh, now this is a tough one. While I mostly specialize in comedy, I have dabbled in drama, as this story I wrote can tell you:
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
- Drama
In an alternate universe where the villains won, Luna is busy living a quiet life in a land far away from Equestria. But one day an old friend shows up to ask a favor of her.Then again, this story also has comedic moments in it, most of them courtesy of Discord. My approach would be to start off dramatic, then add humorous moments and bits of dialogue before getting into more drama later on. Well, that's my approach anyway.
But how do I write comedic moments of my own, and how do I make sure they don't ruin the drama and vice versa?
5131586
When it comes to making sure the comedy doesn't ruin the drama and vice-versa, it would probably be best not to go into comedy immediately after a very dramatic moment. Allow the audience time to take in the dramatic moment that just happened. And as for writing comedic moments of your own, I'm...not sure how to answer that one. Maybe have the heroes engage in a bit of banter or something like that?
Oh, and thanks for the follow BTW.
Okay. Thanks, and you're welcome.