Inquiry for my Bionicle story · 4:10am Sep 13th, 2019
Hello, my friends! I've been having trouble with my Bionicle story. I've recently started watching the new Netflix series Dark Crystal: Age of Resistance and got an idea. What if I started from scratch and made the story in a later date? Make it in third person for starters, set the date of when the Makuta came to Equestria several hundred years back (when Nightmare Moon is still trapped), and had the Makuta play the role of guardians/providers of the ponies.
In this world, the Makuta are seen as Higher-ups (but not as high as Celestia) and teach the ponies about the world/universe. Similar to how I have it now, Twilight would still be transformed into a Makuta but it was when she snuck into the Makuta Spire/ship and got trapped in a crystal vat when sneaking around and was transformed. In this world, she'd be 17 years old. Valkaan would still be her mentor and Rahaa would be her trauma counselor.
Please give me your thoughts and any ideas of your own on this, or if I should just keep what I've got and go on. That, or skip ahead a year after the Makuta show themselves to the public and transfer the story to third person there and then? Please let me know.
I wo und Love to see your idea play out
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Do you think I should start another story instead of redoing my current one?
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I would say that you should firstly write a second story, let the old one stay here thou. So if you like to work with the old version more, you can just cancel the new one
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I would second what Makutaxarxas has said keep this and have another story started. The Crystal Wolves (books name) went and deleted his old story after 20 some chapters for the Current rewrite and I would have liked the old one to have stayed up just to go back and read it.