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foxmaster


big time mlp and ace attorney fan

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  • 19 weeks
    planning to bring awakening back.

    I know my original story awakening the Turquoise did not not go so well and a lot of people did not like it but i did not have the heart to completely erase it. after thinking for a bit and remembering how a dear friend of mine told me she loved it i decided to bring it back but this time change some stuff based on the suggestion from the one who reviewed my second attempt.

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  • 23 weeks
    Regarding the future of of the hoenn saga of my pokemon series.

    during my vacation i had a lot of time to think and review what i wrote so far several times. I noticed i made two big mistakes with the story. the first is that i completely rushed into it not giving my readers time to catch up or make it exciting in any way. the second was i was just copying the anime instead of adapting it into my own style like i usually do as indicated by the new girl and

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  • 43 weeks
    regarding Dr.moon

    I'm sorry to say but i completely lost any ideas for the parody of dr.stone i wrote. i'm starting to think an island of amazons and science are a terrible mix. it feels like i'm trying to pull random resuorces out of a small land mass where they don't belong. i'm sorry to say but i plan to delete it. maybe i will try again but for now i'm scraping it since it felt like no one liked it anyway.

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  • 69 weeks
    regarding TBTS and Dr.Moon

    I have decided to put TBTS season 2 and Dr.Moon on hiatus so I can focus on my big project since I have reason to believe the cause of my writer's block is that I'm thinking on chapters for multiple stories when I should be focused on finishing one before the other. i hope those of you who only want to read those can understand and be patient a little bit longer.

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  • 122 weeks
    Pokemon Turquoise Johto is back

    That's right I finally got my inspiration back so that means I can resume the journey and the story.

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Aug
31st
2019

planning my next chapter for Awakening · 9:19pm Aug 31st, 2019

since I feel my sequel will most likely be completely ignored I am planning my next chapter for Awakening the Turquoise. I have a few ideas but I'm not sure which to go with so I am leaving it to you guys to vote for what happens next.

1: Turquoise presents her invention to Silver corps board of directors which leads to Haruka having to save her from one of them.

2: Turquoise and Ruby begin training Ace and his friends to be proper ladies for when they adopt their new identities.

3: I skip ahead to the new school year and Turquoise joins the club Sapphire and her friends are in and some fun stuff happens.

4: Turquoise has one of her uncles come over and spends the day with her family.

I won,t be able to see the results right away since I will be evacuating to a shelter for Hurricane Dorian or longer if my house gets destroyed.

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Comments ( 1 )

I like option 4 I feel like she doesn't have enough family moments

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