Review : The Foal in Daybreaker's Room · 2:02pm Aug 17th, 2019
The Foal in Daybreaker's Room
By Foals Errand
Twilight Sparkle had been preparing for her entrance exam for so long, just to blow it at the end! If only she could get away to a place no one would know her.
Sometimes wishes come true.
A Collab with The Abyss
Edited by RK
Crystal Aura’s Opinion
This story revolves around the different scenario that would have taken place when Twilight was surged with raw magic during her test at Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns.
Honestly speaking, I didn’t see this coming. And if I tell you what was coming, I would be giving you spoilers. So I’ll just be a good little pony here & will allow you to read it & know for yourself. The ending was tasting like malice. Mmm… love that taste! Uh, um, just kidding, he he he.
Okay, so I might let you out on one teeny weeny bit of a spoiler. You’ll see a lot of cute Twilight & mighty Daybreaker moments. The story was short & sweet, while still keeping with Daybreaker’s fiery attitude. Wonder what would be the situation of Twilight’s parents...
Overall cuteness overloaded. And as all comments below on the story are saying, I would say “I need MOAR!”
Details
Word Count : 1.5k
Current total views : 10k
Current rating : 1,247 : 17
Series : MLP : FiM
Type of Story : Alt. Universe
Characters : Twilight, Daybreaker
Tags : Slice of Life
Comments
Raith021
More or is this good? Let me know!
Yes, more, yes. More, yes.
More.
King Kenya
I never know what to say when people start with a picture and turn it into a story. But I like it. Carry on!
NorrisThePony
Nice bit of cute, although there are quite a few threads left over that a continuation may do good picking up.
Eroraf86
Adorkable filly Twilight and Daybreaker? YES PLEASE! May I have some more?
I loved that comic as soon as I saw it on Derpibooru. Too much cute.
