Readers Editors Wanted

Hello! How are you? Okay so, I have been running around looking for a own one who will read and tell me their perspective on a story that I really want to get out. But I can't without at LEAST ONE PERSON to look at it and give me a good, honest but not harsh, opinion. I have tried the writers helper deal, I haven't gotten anything and it's been a moon and a half. I know that not everyone can be active every week or even two weeks, but I really am just want to get the proof reading over with so that I can post.

Story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/435627/the-fall-of-sunset-shimmer-3

The password to this is: Sunset Shimmer

This story is a dark, thriller, that is tagged as "M" because it is going to get a little extreme in some points and there are some gray parts. Please PLEASE understand that this particular story is meant to evoke emotions and may be a tear jerker. It is really an interesting story to read and it is not complete yet. I am planning to expand on it. But I just need someone to tell me what they think of the first few chapters just to help me to be able to know which direction I should take it. THIS FIC IS NOT MEANT TO BE HAPPY! Please be warned!!!

But aside from that, this story’s setting starts out in Equestria and I have no desire of changing it into the human world until the sequel. (Yep I already have a plot in mind for a sequel.) Anyways, I just need someone to read the first few chapters so that I can continue on with the story. I don’t care who, just as long as you don’t mind doing the task and volunteering your time to help me out. I know it’s a lot to ask and that most of you are always busy, but I would greatly appreciate it if you did. Thank you!😊

I will credit your time. :3