Troubleshooting

I'm having a little trouble for the next few chapters of Lifetime Benefits.

Honestly I need a bit of help on figuring out where to take them. There is a catch though. See the next three mares are Stellar Flare, Sunburst's mother. The other two are Spoiled Rich and Upper Crust. Upper Crust is the pony who made fun of Rarity in that episode where she was avoiding her friends to go to the party hosted by Fancy Pants. And you know I like to keep you guessing so each chapter is fun and... I guess cloppable to but that's where the catch comes in.

Stellar Flare is divorced as far as I have started writing in this story. But that's not the case for the other two. Honestly they are loathsome ponies in the context of the show but as far as connotations go so far the two will engage in cheating on their spouses. There's no way around that. And as much as there is hate for the two I'm not a consciously mean spirited person. I may need some help here on what should happen. Not in terms of a co author... but someone to bounce ideas off. I have ideas but I need some help refining them into something that could work.

So, as much as I don't want to talk about it I am. There will be spoiler tags revealing what I am planning. And if possible I would like some feedback before I work on them. Do not read if you don't want to be spoiled on what was planned. These are liable to be changed at any time so don't expect them to already be written in stone.

Stellar Flare - After leaving Sunburst with his father she enters MC's abode. When she finds out that it is a Estrus Clinic, she asks MC to video tape a raunchy fuckfest. She then has him enchant the tape so that her ex could only watch it once before it is erased. Just to spite him. This is in the context that she is divorced and in the process of hating on him due to circumstances I'd write about later. Not justified but people do horrible things when pissed in a mode of one ups man ship.

Spoiled Rich - Filthy Rich wants MC to train his wife into a subservient cocksleeve. It works... but not for Filthy. Accidental Cuckolding in this scenario.

Upper Crust - Upper Crust tied up Jet Set and forces him to watch MC fuck her. Complete Cuckolding. Context is that they are already cheating on each other heavily usually not even keeping it secret that they are fucking other ponies. The only reason they stay together is the status that they bring each other.

So yeah... feedback on how to fix that up would be great. Already I'm not a fan of cheating and I know that this sounds like justification of a sort but the sad truth is that this story... regardless of how many comments have told me how well written it is. It is still just a clopfic at the end of the day. The characters are just that, characters in words, and what happens to them is at my whim. I don't want to have to put this story away again for another six months so if you like this story please offer up some feedback and if you don't want to make it public then offer up a PM. I'll answer best I can.

Lighter note. I'm thinking of writing an addendum story to this story that details some key moments of MC's life including his real name. Probably. As soon as I think of one.