Constructive Criticism · 1:03am Nov 8th, 2012
I have looked over some of the reviews for my first story and im learning from them, im going to be ironing out the mistakes I made in the story to the best of my ability. Give me some time.
You did kinda fuck up the story...
I know that Voice, now get back in Ray's head -_-
Aright, no need to use emoticons on me.