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...I was actually facepalming. · 12:24pm Mar 2nd, 2019
I mean... Hi. I mean, I get it is not really your concern as readers once you made it past the hellscape that is the third chapter, but... You could have t least told me about it. I was wondering as to why hundreds if not thousands of views were dropping since that chapter! I was cringing so hard while reading it, oh my good everything, I cannot EVEN like ugh believe I wrote all that. LIKE that.
At least I edited it a little bit while I'm not too tired, so there's that. I am gonna change up my story's description to include "If you see any typos or horrible use of writing, please notify me via PM or comments." Gonna do that right now. Yeah. Fuck my life and everything in it, what the hell was I even doing?
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Do you want a proof-reader?
5022044
I would appreciate one, but, I'd rather do it on my own for now. The only trouble I am having is with the previous chapters, as for proof-reading, well... I'll have to figure something out.
5022046
If you want me to proof-read for you, just ask. I'll find the time.
5022074
Thank you, I might, I just don't like suddenly popping up and asking after a month of no news 'hey, new chapter here, like 20 k words, could you read it AND make sense of it?' I suppose I could always just drop the link to the proof-reader to my google doc. Thank you for the offer, I'll PM you if I decide to ask you. If you can't find time then, then it's fine.
5022085
Proof-reading is not the same as pre-reader, you can just send it to me. I have no problem with that or you can contact me through discord. Up to you, have a nice day.
5022085
If you want me too i can criticize it a little more on flow and cringeness.