State of Hive Address, 1 · 6:39pm Feb 6th, 2019
Greetings my Little.... Followers. Can't call you drones. Anyways thanks for following me as i know you are here for the story; this being my first blog i know it's not the sound of my voice. I wish i had more drones though. Drones that wouldn't bob their heads and say 'yes' or....
Me: So how was it?
Drone: there's something wrong with it.
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Me: And that would be?
Drone: a few grammer errors. Sentence structure.
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Me: can you point them out?
Drone: in a bit.
(We know how that turns out)
To give that drone credit there are mistakes but my brain (which was taught to do things phonically) [phonetically] can only identify a problem. So my oldest and most trustworthy drones (Word and Google) have been a big help. I'll start crediting the breathing ones once I hear back from them.
Enough complaining!
Sci-Fi is out of steam!
Chapter 3 is no further along than when i posted chapter 2.Which is funny and ironic cuz it is the only story ever to have a beginning, middle and end planned out in advance. Chapter 4 is almost done. It's only 4 because it is the intermission between act 1 and act 2. I'm thinking it'll be chapter 5 or 6.
Fantasy is in!
I have Chapters 1, 2 and 4 (literal 4) 90% done on this story that has been rattling around my head for a decade and a half. On it's fifth rewrite (first with magic ponies) in that i go from the ground up again. As of last month I do have an 'end' where I will do a timeskip.
Does it need to be Ponies? That question was actually on the help section and deserves almost no thought. My Little Pony does not need ponies, except Hasbro needs to sell their stuff. You could have six Power Puff Girls doing these last eight seasons and it would be fine (i don't think it would last but yeah, not necessary).
That said each character has a real Pathfinder Character Sheet (which will only be followed if it doesn't restrict the story) which, i think my problem on the first story; i got next to nothing like that on Voices of the Void.
So this next week I'll brush off "Roleplay is Magic" and get everyone stated. It is a narrative system and works quite well for Equestria. That is what i need; notes out of my head and onto paper (digital paper). Proper planning is a thing i rarely do but know it is needed.
Mmm....
Also the As-Of-Yet Unnamed story Will be submitted this month.