New fanfic preview, Background ponies to the rescue. · 8:55pm Nov 5th, 2012
Pinkie Pie banana scene
dtlux1
"We are glad that all thee could make it." Luna said, "It is the upmost importants that you be here."
"Why?" asked Derpy.
"Because," replied Luna, "The famous ponies from Ponyville have gone missing. We need you to help find them."
"Why us?" asked Octavia, "I can only play the violin, and I'm pretty sure that Vinyl can only play music annoyingly loud through the thing she has."
"HEY!" shouted Vinyl, "My blast cannon is way bett..."
"SILENCE!" yelled Luna in the royal canterlot voice, everypony got quiet. "Do you have any questions?"
"What about Dinky, and my mail delivering, and muffin eating?" asked Derpy.
"Dinky will be taken care of by Carrot Top," replied Luna, "We shall get somepony else to bring the citizens of Ponyville their mail, as for the muffin problem, you will have a day to prepare for your trip. In this time you can pack anything that you can fit in your saddle bags. Any other questions?"
"Princess Luna?" asked Lyra, "If I pack some pie will any parasprites eat it?"
"You know that that only happened because Twilight put a spell on them." said Bon Bon.
"Well," said Luna while thinking, "While no parasprites will eat your pie, we would not recommend bringing any wi..." Luna stopped when she noticed something in Lyra's saddle bag, "Lyra," asked Luna, "What is that in your saddle bag?"
"Oh, this," asked Lyra "It's just my lunch, do you want a banana Princess?"
"NO!!!!" yelled Luna, "1,000 YEARS IS LONG ENOUGH!!!!"
"Oh," yelled Pinkie Pie, who had appeared behind Lyra out of nowhere, "Can I have a banana?!? I love bananas!"
"JUST GET THAT THING OUT OF HERE!" yelled Luna, forgetting that Pinkie was supposed to be missing, "1,000 YEARS IS LONG ENOUGH!!!!"
"Itsh jusht sha banana." said Pinkie while she had it in her mouth. "But, ok, I'll leave. I wouldn't want to spoil the plot of the story!" Then Pinkie disappeared into thin air.
"Princess Luna?" asked Doctor Whooves, "Wasn't that one of the ponies we were looking for?"
"What?" replied Luna flatly.
"Wasn't that pink pony one of the ponies that went missing last month?"
"OH NO!" yelled Luna, "WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY SOMETHING?!?"
"I just did." replied the Doctor.
"Whatever," said Luna sadly, "Just go and get ready for tomorrow!" After that, all the ponies left to get ready for the next day.
Story by: dtlux1
If you have a better name for this fanfic, please tell me,
dtlux1
A scene from the second chapter, I hope you like it
dtlux1
Ah, so you're writing a story in which Lyra, Bon Bon, Doctor Whooves, Derpy, Octavia and Vinyl Scratch are the main protagonists? I may keep an eye on you. Though your writing skills do need improvement.