New and Improved Chapter One! · 9:45am Jan 20th, 2019
"Yes, after long hard work the new and improved Chapter One is done!" Flim says with a bow.
"Smoother, and bolder than ever before!" Flam added.
"What are you two doing in my Blog post!"
"We just trying to help sell your product deer writer!"
"The blog and story are free. Go, get out of here."
"Free? Say it isn't so!" The two took off running.
Okay back to the normal blog. I rewrote Chapter One of Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare. Cleaned up the past tense and hopefully made it easier to follow. Please tell me if I was successful in my endeavor. As for Flim and Flam, well one of them is the father of one of my secondary characters!