So... · 5:11am Dec 28th, 2018
I cancelled Echoes. It just.. wasn't coming to me. I hated everything I wrote, and restarted the chapter multiple times. After four years of that, I'm calling it quits on this particular story. I'll still be around, just probably working on something new.
Hey, it is what it is, the first was great, be proud of that!
It happens man. Best to move on, rather than linger on a project that isn't moving forward.
Aw damn, this sucks ass.
Your writing was great, so no worries on that. I'll be here for whatever you decide to do my guy.
Sorry to hear that, but thanks for coming forward with it. Can you tell us one thing though. Please pleas please, tell me Cinder was going to get a gruesome death.
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I've spent quite a lot of time pondering how to do that. I made her a tad too powerful in the first place, but I've got some ideas on how to pull it off.
I can promise she was never going to die of natural causes. Raider life doesn't support that.
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Boy, I'll say. Personally I think you went overboard when you had her blowing up steel rangers by heating up the explosives inside their intricate armor frame work.
But, anyway it was still a fun enough read that I'm not particularly let down by the sequel's cancellation. So are you done with this world entirely, because (yeah, I'm about to be that guy) personally I always thought the paragons were the most interesting part of the story and an origin fic about their lives in the stable before and leading up to them becoming killers would've been interesting (like the unrequited love of Massa-cuck). Even a story about how Flurry joined their ranks. It must've been an interesting first impression she made on Hate (that or just affirmative action), and I always imagined that Skyline would've been itching for an excuse to shoot her given that she's an outsider.
... Okay I'm done shamelessly pitching, all the best though.
I read your first story and I was honestly kinda hoping that the sequel would have continued on. I mean I get it. I've experienced that level of writers block in a different fandom. I just wish you could make a chapter explaining where you going and a vague idea on how you envisioned it ending. Otherwise it just feels abrupt and out on the wind. Besides who knows, maybe putting those thoughts on paper might help job those writing skills and get you back in the saddle? Idk. I hope one day you're able to offer an end game and we can fill in the blanks.