Trouble Writing · 6:18am Nov 12th, 2018
I'm not going to lie, I've had this problem for a while. I've been trying to branch out in different clop stories for a while now, one with not only interesting sex but an interesting plot as well. But... I've been having some trouble. I wouldn't exactly call it writer's block, more like a fleeting sense of interest. I might think up of an interesting sexy premise that seems like it would make a great clopfic, but what seems like an awesome idea one day might not seem that interesting to me a day or two later. If I actually want to write something into a completed fic, I have to work fast before it gets boring, but that doesn't really happen seeing as I like to take my time on them.
Well anyway, I'm pretty sure my editor, The Great Derpsby, is secretly getting angry at me for asking him to edit things that haven't been published. I was thinking of posting a single fiction on this site containing all my incomplete and random one part clop. But I'm not sure if anyone has done something like that before or if that's even allowed. At the very least, I could upload another blog containing all the different ideas I've had over the months for anyone interested.
But below I'm going to list a few of the stories that made it past the idea phase. Just the basic premise of a few of the clop fics I actually got around to writing but never publishing. I'm curious to know how interesting you guys think these are.
1. Flim and Flam got a new business idea involving selling cloned copies of the mane 6 from the Mirror Pool. Like the Pinkie Pie ones, these clones look exactly like the original but with greatly reduced intelligence. So naturally the stallions who buy them to "help around the house" as advertised, but just end up screwing them silly all day long. Clones can't get pregnant or require any food to survive making them idea for the job. Naturally, Twilight and the others hate the idea, but seeing as she "blasted" a dozen or two Pinkie Pies, she can't exactly classify the clones as pony beings, otherwise she'd be admitting she committed mass murder. Therefore she sees little choice but to classify the clones as property. As more and more obedient beautiful cloned mares are produced and sold to horny stallions, Equestria's original mares start to be, in a sense, put out of business... Interesting and drastic social and societal changes are likely. All worth it though for Flim and Flam though, seeing as they made a decent profit. God Bless Capitalism!
2. EqG centered story involving Fluttershy and a few other random students from CHS and Crystal Prep. Basically it's a story involving them all living together in a shared frat house community where all the girls are required to be naked and where sex is casual. Another CMNF story. Fluttershy's friends are all suspicious when they learn of Fluttershy's unknown living arrangements. If they found out, they would of course, believe that they are taking advantage over the poor girl, even though Fluttershy would have maintained the strange setup has been a positive one for everyone involved and all the boys are very kind and respecting.
Honestly though, I think this story was based more on an abstract concept I had that rather than fight against the ever increasing current of objectification and sexulatization of women, you instead opt to embrace it fully for better results for both genders. A fic that could actually convince someone that this type of thing could work and be beneficial in the real world would be far more disturbing that any edgy grimdark rape story you'll find on this site.
3. MyStable. I actually already made the simple cover art. Cover Art. It's a huge tech savvy social networking site like Facebook, but instead focused around others in your area and in your age bracket... and focused on adult content. By default all accounts are set to private and can only be seen by other accounts in that verified area and age bracket. The adult content is mostly focused on the female side with the male accounts able to make requests, donate virtual currency, schedule meet-ups, etc. Female accounts, on the other hand, can post pics, videos, streams, and take requests for bits. Derpibooru like tagging system, because admit it, their system is great. Guys can still submit pics and videos with girls tagged in them, and the girls even receive bonus points for it! Some girls start to discover how much of a gold mine their bodies are really worth. Mainly when the rich kids at Crystal Prep seem more interested in CHS girls than their own school's girls.
It's kind of competitive thing as more and more people get involved from both CHS and Crystal Prep. Specifically when the site's rankings come out for things like most number of followers, highest cum score, best ranking from guys they've hooked up with, weekly challenges, and body measurements. And for the purpose of this story... we're going to pretend no one's parents exist. Possible involvement from our favorite principals and maybe sirens with a load of other websites features I put a disturbing amount of thought thinking up.
Of course, even if this was an actual site that existed in real life, it still wouldn't be as bad as the actual Facebook. I'm pretty sure they acted complacent in the foreign influence during our last election that helped give us our current President. Not to mention their methods of segmenting like minded groups together, which to be fair, is good in most cases, but for political purposes only serves as a platform that helps builds towards echo chambers and extremism. How many thousands of people died in Myanmar again?
Oh wait, I'm getting off topic again. Anyway, curious to know what you guys think! I'm kind of leaning towards the MyStable one right now.
I definitely like number 2. Not sure how I feel about MyStable, but could be fun.
I love your number2 idea.I think it maths with your another story the most.
Number 1 for sure, though I'd be fine with 2, just not as big a fluttershy fan as I am for girls like rainbow or pinkie
I could dig 2.
Whichever you find most inspiration to write most should be fine, I guess.
I'll throw my hat in the third one, but I'd like to see parents get involved, and even encourage and support these antics. Also, you need to take the "s" out of the HTTPS in your pic, otherwise, it gives a 403 error.
Number 1 gets my vote if you're up to it.
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Curious to you guys what's seems interesting about that one.
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Well, we have confidence in your skills for one.
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Mostly because your CMNF stories have been really enjoyable, and there aren't many done well.
I am most interested in 1 because I have seen "males become obsolete" stories but never the other way around and I would like to see a version of that.
2 Is a interesting idea and I would like to see you expand on it. There is a story that goes halfway with your idea: Twilight's Secret Journal.
Number 3 does not sound that interesting to me. It sounds a bit shallow
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#1 & #2😃
You're allowed to publish bunch of short story. I'm 100% sure there's no rules on that. I think I saw a bunch of stories with each chapter being a standalone clop before.
As a fellow writer (though I've never posted any of my work here) I understand what you're going through, and as of late I've taken the approach of 'what seems like a fun idea', not necessarily a good idea, just what seems fun.
That said, of your three major ideas, I like the second idea the most just because it seems like it would be the less stressful :D
Nah, I'm more quietly wondering/blaming myself if I'm not helping enough.
Well if you're having trouble writing or coming up with some ideas I can suggest some or give feedback on some of your ideas if you're interested.
Like how about a Secret Note Club where the students and staff submit notes detailing their secret sexual fantasies and the secret, unknown members of the club find a way to fulfill said fantasies with everyone coming out of it with huge smiles on their faces.