Seriously about Equestria MILFs · 1:59pm Oct 12th, 2018
I have the third and final installment written.
The problem is that I think it sucks.
The prose is tangled, sure. That's not a big deal, I can fix that. The problem is that there's no conflict. I could have gotten some milage out of Mac being jealous of sharing Fluttershy with Spike, but. a.) that's kind'a soap opera and b.) he seemed not to care as long as he got to do stuff with futa amazon Twilight. Everybody's happy and they have group sex in various combinations for 10K or so words.
SO.
If you like Equestria MILFS:
Do you want a better plot? Or just a lot of sex.
If nobody seems interested I'm just going to go work on something else, so if you want to see the series concluded plz respond. For your sake. Not mine. I'm only even posting this because people occasionally ask me about EqM III 
There doesn't always have to be conflict to make a good story. Somiits just friends getting together and having fun!
Maybe the conflict, if you need one, could be Spike and Big Mac wanting to get together and trying to find the time and moment between being with their other friends.
Just an idea.
I'd hate to see the series go away without the third part, and happy sex is fine!
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Interesting idea! There is, in fact, no Spike/Mac in this and I don't know why, since it is definitely Bi Mac.
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Well, maybe there could be. It might be fun!
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It'll take a major rewrite, but I think it could be worth it.
Both for the story and for me.
Just have one of Th MC's have to do something mundane on top of the stuff, making it time conflict with lewds. Like having a plumber(mailman, Harry the bear) come over and having to hide what you are doing while stalling for cleanup time to open the door or something. (Haven't read the story, so I might be bit off, but thats what I do if I don't have conflict and pure smut). That or you could make something a competition, or inner struggle about trying/asking partner to try new fetish.
Remember, overcoming your fear of wanting to ride that phallic looking bedpost in front of someone you like is a conflict. Or something.
I should probably read it before mouthing off tho.
Anyhow, I think you gonna do just fine. I believe in you making great stories. You be just fine.
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If it's good for you, then the effort is worth it. But whichever way you choose, I know it will be a good story and will be enjoyed by many!
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Really happy that you went and read them both apparently.
If you just starred them for later don't tell me; let me bask in my illusionary pride. 