Chrysalis always wins....I want to do it right! · 1:36pm Oct 7th, 2018
Garfield23's story had a decent concept behind it...but he was never comfortable with smutty stories. It's why he's stopped doing clop stories and it's also why this story's sequel failed so badly. We have been discussing the story and despite originally being willing to allow me to use his first few chapters of the story....he changed his mind and said I'm allowed to use the concept and the original story line but not allowed to lift the chapters directly. The fact is he is right, it's a story I like but there are flaws (And I ain't talking grammar or spelling which I am also guilty of) so I have been writing a new opening chapter to the story which hopefully will be a little better. Unlike Garf I have no issue with not writing pure smut.
This is all thanks to the request Spike2000 who originally did make a request of old Garf to redo his story but thanks Garf for getting Spike2000 to ask me...I know mate how you feel but cheers. And 50% of the credit to Spike2000 for asking Garf in the first place.
If you haven't read the original here's a link to it https://www.fimfiction.net/story/252406/chrysalis-always-wins It may make sense to read it before reading my interpretation of it.
I honestly don't know what to say
All can I say is thanks for mentioning me and I wish you the best of luck and I hope everybody will enjoy your story
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Well as a special Thank you, when the first chapter is finished I want to let you read it before anyone else, well you and Grumpy Garf(He told me he wants to see what "Done right" means)
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Thanks!
All right!
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Cool your jets though I've written the first half of chapter one but planning the other chapters needs to be done. Quick Question I'm considering adding Nightmare Rarity and Sunset Shimmer to the story. Would this be agreeable to you. Also I want to give you co writer credit because lets be fair without you, this story would have been sitting as Garf's buried secret under his super Sentai story and Equestria Crossover stuff.
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And if you have a plan for Nightmare Rarity and Sunset Shimmer. Then I say go for it. 
Thanks