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Dusk Melody


I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.

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Sep
10th
2018

School Raze Sucks Big Giant Ass Balls · 12:07am Sep 10th, 2018

THEY LOCKED A FOAL AWAY IN TARTARUS BUT NOT STARLIGHT GLIMMER????

WHAT THE HELL BULLSHIT IS THIS?

Sure Cozy Glow was bad, but was she as bad as Starlight who almost DESTROYED FUCKING TIME?

Starlight got let off with a snapshot redemption

Tempest Shadow terrorised Equestria, forced the land into slavery and she got a snapshot redemption

Stygian was THE PONY OF FUCKING DARKNESS and he got let off with a snapshot redemption

BUT A MISGUIDED FOAL GETS LOCKED AWAY IN FUCKING TARTARUS??????????

I. am. so. AAAAAAAARGH!

If the sun setting on the 3rd day was a big thing, WHY did Celestia lower the damn thing?

WHY did nobody. Literally NOBODY but the racist stallion question the foal running the school?

where was that whole mini-arc with Chrysalis and her revenge?

Where was the damned Tree of fucking Harmony?

Why was Starswirl only writing by letter?

Why were the Princesses so damn useless?

GAAAAAH!

WHY when Princess Idiot Ball was trying to get out of Tartarus, WHY didn't they summon Discord? like, all of our magic is gone and we're defenceless, now, who would be good to have on our side?

Oh yeah, the GOD OF CHAOS!

the only ONLY reason they didn't use Discord was because he could've ended it in a heartbeat.

I mean, come on! this is a cartoon that gave us Canterlot Wedding and Twilight's Kingdom and Rainbow Rocks and now we had the stinking festering rotting pile of horse shit that was School Raze?

Fuck you Hasbro and fuck G4. You've killed FIM with this finale.

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If the sun setting on the 3rd day was a big thing, WHY did Celestia lower the damn thing?

I'm pretty sure it was referring to the time that would take place at. Also, that could throw the world into utter chaos, perhaps even more so than Cozy's magic thievery.
Also, the difference is that Cozy didn't show even a flash of regret. In fact, she may have been even more vicious than before. I get the feeling she's an unredeemable villain like Tirek.
They didn't question a foal running the school because she was known as very responsible and good, and they themselves were foals, so they'd be happy with it (and they did show a little bit of hesitance, so it's fine either way).
The mini arc will happen in season 9.
Uh, how would they summon him, exactly? Also, it's possible that even his magic had been sucked away. It's been shown that it can happen.
It had problems, but I found it to at least be a very entertaining finale.

Taking a tv show a bit far aren't you? I found the final very good now I can understand the issues with Starlight also I doubt that Cozy was a foal she acted more adult then half of anything also I doubt it killed the show.

What are you talking about? Cozy's last appearance was in What Lies Beneath. The season ends with Father Knows Beast.

Shh, shh, let the darkness of ignorance take you, you are not dying, you are not dying, just float downstream into the bliss of denial.

Starlight Glimmer showed herself capable of shock, regret and remorse for her actions. Cozy Glow has shown no such capacity...and is also probably batshit crazy on a level that makes the Joker look sane.

I object less to her being locked away in Tartarus, and more to her being locked away seemingly without a trial. Though admittedly, I'd have preferred she be executed for her crimes. You disagree with that, fine, but I hope you can respect my opinion as I respect yours.

I wouldn't say it killed FIM, but... this part:

Starlight got let off with a snapshot redemption

Tempest Shadow terrorised Equestria, forced the land into slavery and she got a snapshot redemption

Stygian was THE PONY OF FUCKING DARKNESS and he got let off with a snapshot redemption

BUT A MISGUIDED FOAL GETS LOCKED AWAY IN FUCKING TARTARUS??????????

is definitely the truth that may hurt.

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I don't disagree with execution, although can you execute a child, really? Along those lines, why wasn't Starlight, Tempest and Stygian executed? Those three MAY have expressed remorse, but you have to admit their crimes were far worse than Cozy Glow's ever were.

Cozy stole magic.

Starlight tried to rip apart the fabric of time and destroy the universe. Tempest and Stygian did what they did. The fact is they were offered redemptions with absolutely NO consequences for their crimes whatsoever and here, a foal is sentenced to a maximum security prison.

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Uh, how would they summon him, exactly?

All Spike did was say his name aloud in the Hearts & Hooves episode and he appeared.

Also, that could throw the world into utter chaos, perhaps even more so than Cozy's magic thievery.

Nightmare Moon not lowering the moon didn't seem to throw the world into chaos in Friendship is Magic Part 1 & 2 and The Cutie Remark.

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Taking a tv show a bit far aren't you?

Perhaps I expect too much from a TV show. Then again, I know the creators can do better. Return to Harmony, A Canterlot Wedding, The Crystal Empire, Twilight's Kingdom and Rainbow Rocks are all examples of the creators doing better!

School Raze by comparison was phoned in, by the numbers trash.

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I was hoping that in this finale Hasbro would break the cycle of the snapshot redemption with no consequences that has been prevalent in MLP FIM since Starlight Glimmer - this includes Tempest, Stygian, Wallflower Blush, Vignette - but at the same time I was hoping it would be a more deserving criminal, like Chrysalis, for instance.

Had Cozy Glow revealed herself to be Chrysalis, then yes! Imprison her! But a foal? When all the others have been let off with zero consequences, it's a foal that gets sent to a maximum security prison.

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coughscapegoatcough... Please, mine lief, could thou pass me the cough mixture! Cough-cough...

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:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: I think I'll join you in that drink.

Well, yeah, Season 8 finale was a little weird, and in my view, probably the scariest. Like that last shot of Cozy Glow saying to Tirek "Wanna be friends?", I was like; "Dang, the show's taking a darker turn!". But what matters I think that after the end of another season, we have Season 9 to look forward to and the end of G4 ponies.

Also, another poor performance from Starlight.

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Yeah, this blog was a bit of a rant, I'm afraid.

Usually I can forgive episodes of MLP for being what they are, but School Raze really angered me in a way no other has since season four's Filli Vanilli, Trade Ya and Testing 1,2,3.

While you're here would you like to check out my latest story, "The Problem With Pets"?

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Yeah, I would say this was an emotional rant. I have had those myself only once, with "Uncommon Bond." That was the biggest pile of horse shit episode ever created in any show, ever. Now I didn't say that it killed the series but it did anger me quite a bit. With you saying they killed FiM with that finale, I take it you will no longer watch?

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