revamping · 6:43pm Feb 9th, 2012
I had not noticed untill submission how utterly short new colt parts two and three were after submitting. I will attempt to coalate the group into one piece.
per to the reaction from a critiquing brony, I will attempt to revamp the story line to a third person format. accusations of "Mary Sue" are prompting this action. one more accusation of mary sue-ing will result in immediate withdrawal of the story.