Pinkie Pie Takes the Wheel · 8:19pm Jul 25th, 2018
Pink bounces right up to your computer screen with an happy smile upon her face. "Hey umm... So Sunrise is gonna go for a Memory for a bit. Buttttt” Pink pauses to giggle and smiles directly at you, so cheery it's infectious. “How do you like the story? I mean I know you can't talk to me but maybe leave a comment about your favorite part so far. Also the part you hated the most." Pink winks and snickers as she starts to reach through the screen.
She is gathering up various controller implements from your entertainment center or someone else's reading with you. "Oh! And hit the like button because if you don't or you hit the dislike button, I'll do bad things to you. And not the bad things you read in the clop fic before you got here. The kind of bad things that Nyota does to anypony who hurts Sunrise." Pink picks up an xbox, PS4, and Wii controller, a mouse, a keyboard, and a flight joystick. "Okay I gotta go pilot Sunrise for a bit, not sure which one of these will work."
Pink starts to leave and her head turns back over her shoulder, "Oh and before you complain about breaking the 4th, remember; in 19 years, I'm gonna do it to LittlePip." Pink winks coyly with a smirk staring directly at the reader. "And boy, it's gonna be brutal what I do to Blackjack.” Pink bounces away, dropping the joystick as she disappears from view. “Enjoy the memory!”
Enjoying the story so far, just hit the halfway point.
So far, the flashbacks are starting to give me hints at what happened to Sunrise, but I can't be sure yet.
Still a tad confused by Box Pone, but I enjoy the strange so no complaints here.
Best of luck on the next chapters, I should be caught up soon. Cheers!
As of chapter 14 I'm enjoying things, and looking forward to seeing how things go.
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oh wow you are in for a trip by chapter 22.
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Box Pone is gonna keep us that way till you realize what she really is.
Unable to pinpoint any one component or story segment.... what I do know is that you have made me laugh many times. You have made me cry on at least two occasions. So....if the measure of a story how someone reacts to your writing, you have just created art. Art is meant to bring about a reaction and you produce those in spades! Well done.
You know I have been enjoying the whole trip so far!
Heed the pink one's madness, or be in for a lot of badness! This story is cool, and mysterious, and fun, and [Rambling on about awesome characters, and silly pink ponies, and romance...]
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I am glad I made your day.