Jul
20th
2018
If I rewrote Purple tears... · 1:24am Jul 20th, 2018
IF, and this is just an IF, I rewrote Purple Tears, and I'm not saying I am (because you probably now how... I just can't seem to write these things without having an awful anxiety attack)
but still
IF I rewrote it, would you guys want String Play to remain a guy or be a gorl, judging by the facts we know now in fnaf? or should I even just refer to them as they, considering they're supposed to be a kid/the robot at the same time, really
I'm genuinely curious what you guys think about this. Also just saying, if I rewrote it the quality would be 10x better and there would be no chapters just 500 words- and a lot of plot holes would be fixed- it would be a lot less cringy I guess?
Girl
but you can have a duel voice that is both
and have characters keep asking if shes a colt or filly as a nod to the fact it's a bit undefined :3
less cringe and plot holes is always good
https://www.youtube.com/user/MatthewPatrick13/videos is a good way to come up with ideas for FNAF stories, keeps it a bit consistent, great for if you get stumped~
unless you already know this and I'm just being silly =w=
but to be honest, you don't even have to have a pizzaria or animatronics, it could just be about the murdered FNAF children turned pony, finding themselves in Equestria, dealing with a new life, baffling and confusing the adult ponies
have maybe powers they can't control, or not
really there is many things that you could take it, multiverse is vast after all, but I'm getting ahead of myself~
yes rewrite would be wonderful
p.s.
oneshots of String Play in other scenarios, if it's well received, pick one and make a squeal that continue on that scenario
love String Play, don't bury the cute little necromancer~
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yeah, I think that would work pretty well! Thanks for the input, I'm really surprised you've kept up with my purple tears stuff so long wow :'D
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I added more stuff to the post, cause I'm a goof~
unless you've seen it all already, which is me just being silly again
oh and yes I liked the concept, even if the execution wasn't the best at the time~
um and FNAF 6 pizzeria simulator the girl died of exposure to being outside at night and in the rain~ the puppet found her, and they merged somehow that way
If you rewrite Purple Tears I will write a comedic one-shot with Travis getting brutally murdered.
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pfft yeah, I've been taking notes and studying the fnaf timelime aha,but thanks for linking me! I have a few things wrong with matpat's theories (I don't think Mangle is a spirit bound doggo lmao) but they're p cool
Yeah, my execution wasn't great for certain! Using ` instead of ' , calling String Play a filly (guess that works now though), making him a displaced character even though that has no relevance whatsoever, did Purple Guy even exist before the murder? lmao I guess it was good for a 12/13 year old x'D I plan on giving a lot more context to things like Purple Guy if I do rewrite it! And definitely adding in the new lore :D And a 500 word chapter just about Purple Guy dying in the suit...
I'm pretty sure that the girl in the Puppet (Charlotte) is Henry's daughter and was killed, tho? :0 cause there's this one minigame that shows a kid outside the pizzeria, not able to get in, and murdered by William outside aha. I think she would've been murdered because of the Bite Victim tbh, because if the BV was his kid then I guess he would be p mad about his kid dying aha
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Purple guy one, William Afton,( murderer ), second purple guy, Michael Afton ( the guy you play as ) thats important to note~ so don't confuse them ^^
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my inability to remember a Travis is a testament to the age of this story x'D
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pfft of course! I still call the murderer Purple Guy cause it's easier aha
Also because I think the two different times he showed up in the fnaf 2 minigame (I think they were both him, one was present at the murders and the other ended up as a bunny furry) and only once did Michael show up (SL cutscene) so I'll always consider the murderer as the original aha :'D Definitely gonna make a clear distinction between those two though aha
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okay ^^
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The kid outside is a nod to the girl lured by purple guy with the promise of bring the dog ( mangle ) back to life, I'm pretty sure
In ultimate custom night, one of the silly 'anime' intermissions actually confirms that mangle is the dog, by calling them the dog x3
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God DAMN I hate that I'm pulling this up
Here's a reminder
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Ah, yeah, but... Weeeell, and this is all up to speculation (obviously aha) but the arcade girl had blonde hair, and this girl had obviously dark hair. Not to mention Henry refers to the girl outside directly as his daughter (I think, he talks about her in the fnaf 6 ending). It's just, you know, the girl outside wanted to get in, but the girl in the arcade lost her dog. It just... Doesn't seem like there's a big connection there, you know? Of course they could be the same person, since Scott's Scott and anything can happen in fnaf x'D
I mean, they were referred to as the dog, but they also physically speak in fnaf UCN with like, their own voice lines and everything. Like.. A dog don't do that. Of course, UCN is most likely William's hell, so that means it probably doesn't matter if Mangle's got their own voice lines, but I still find it weird that mangle would be a... Possessed dog :'D It's like, everyone else is a kid but Mangle- no. Mangle's a pet. xD
It's super fun to speculate these kinds of things!! I've written out soooo many different timelines aha so it's fun to compare mine to others :0
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ooOOOH OKAY thAT brings back memories!! I remember now aha
I would think girl
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Yeah, I'm definitely going with girl if I do an official rewrite! there's gonna be ponies asking what they are though, since it appears in terms of the game that the Puppet itself is a guy, but the child possessing it is female aha
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Sounds a bit complicated
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It definitely is. I mean technically, if you think about it, in the game the girl is possessing the puppet who's been trapped by an edgy bear called Lefty, so it's like
a girl in a guy in a guy
That sentence... Sounds more wrong than it should.
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now I have that image in my head
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oH NO
NO PLEASE NO D:
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it's too late, it's already in there *hacks*
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oof
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ah I literally watched that like an hour ago aha. I agree with the bulk of what he says- UCN is definitely William's hell (although there were people saying it was Michael, that child doesn't deserve hell) and there is definitely a spirit keeping William down there. Matpat pretty much came to the same conclusion everyone did about this one for once. Thing is, everyone's wondering if this is hell (as in, William's spirit could idk not be tortured when the kid was done), if it's purgatory, or if William has yet to see the true hell due to being held back by the vengeful spirit :0
There's also the problem that he didn't address regarding Fredbear and Golden Freddy. See, if you deathcoin golden freddy you'll get a Fredbear jumpscare. People don't know if that means they're the same character or that GF uses Fredbear as a shield because he can't be taken out of his own creation. Of course until scott confirms or denies any of this we may never know the truth aha!
Or... Maybe he did address those things and I'm just forgetting part of the video already. Sounds about right xD
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he said Fred Bear and Golden Freddy are one and the same, he goes from being on the floor to attacking him directly
you can't death coin him because this is the vengeful spirit's world, so he makes the rules in this place, it's insulting to think Aftin would be able to banish the spirit in his own game~
but lets see what Matty Patty come up with next~
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Yeah! He's supposed to be coming up with a final theory- of course, he could get things wrong, since Scott is the only one who made the game (I'm still curious as to what his retcon is) but hey! We're getting a no lore interview with Scott sometime during August (though it won't be with Matpat aha)
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it's a two parter, gotta wait for the next part most likely next week~ xD
but I like the timeline hes painting so far, makes sense :3
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lmfao I just watched it aha xD
As usual I have things wrong with his theory (fnaf 2 was open for just a few short weeks, he said it had to be open longer than that) but he still has entertaining theories!
I can't wait to hear what he thinks about the Bite Victim- he thinks it's Michael and I think it's Michael's brother aha
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hNNNNG there are so many things I want to point out in his theories. The thing about fnaf is that you can have different theories that still line up with the evidence, but the books and the games are absolutely different!
Michael Afton didn't even exist in the books, and Charlie was only able to exist because she was literally made with love as a robot... as dumb as that sounds. What I mean to say is there are people in the books that don't exist in the games and vise versa. The book isn't mean to be looked into so much, it's an AU with it's own big fanfiction logic and while that's great it's not a good source for finding things out aside from Purple Guy is William and Fredbear's Family diner came first. Heck, Henry kills himself in those books, but not in the games aha
there's no more correlation to Juniors being a FNAF building than it being a bar- (with not being allowed back into and such) why is William orange? He's always purple!
asdfgh my brain hurts I'm rambling again sorry x'''D I get so passionate about fnaf theories
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I understand
and he does state that the game and books are different, but they are about the same subjects, that means one can have a prototype concept, that can be brought into the game and vise versa~
the path to the most true is the one with the least assumptions~
but I do like his timeline x3
one thing that must be said, the ghost possessing Chica died first in the series~
that he confirmed your idea that Puppet (Charlotte), Henry's daughter was killed by Afton
and finally Cassidy (girl) Is Golden Freddy aka Fred bear ( male animatronic )
>Henry kills himself in FNAF World
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o no my comment came out longer than I thought it would rip x'''D Feel free to not read the whole thing!
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yeah but,,, oof it's just, I feel like he's bringing too much book stuff into the game, you know?
Like, the thing about the evidence right now is that technically, sort of, multiple timelines can exist without much trouble. Even ones where chica doesn't die first! er, sort of. What I mean is, William partially owned freddy fazbear's pizza, had kids, had a working and thriving franchise with Henry. He has no reason to kill anyone, except for when Cassidy dies, who has a good chance at being his son. That, and the fact that the puppet is already possessed in give gifts give life when the children (foxy/freddy/bonnie/chica) are given their masks to possess the robots, and then cassidy shows up later like "hey fam I want one too"
I don't know, I just asdfgh I wish scott would clear some things up x''D
I'm finding stuff that works in my timeline that's completely different from his, yet also works in his timeline the way he said it! God fnaf is such a fickle thing aha
I mean, Henry kills himself in fnaf world, and the books, but not in the games. (in the books he creates a robot that murders him for him?? It's weird and written like a fanfiction tbh. He stabs himself in fnaf world, but burns down with everyone else in the last game in fnaf 6. Hecc, will had one kid in the books and 2-3 in the games aha! Everything is just so different ahhh)
regardless, I do love the effort he puts into these things, pulling all nighters like myself to dig through the mess that makes up this lore! He definitely gets a pat on the back for doing so much research, even if he gets different results than other people asdfg
oh! I finally found some stuff on reddit explaining a whole lot better than I can about why they disagree with matpat aha
not to discredit the man, he deserves a congrats!
https://www.reddit.com/r/fivenightsatfreddys/comments/95u3gl/the_reasons_i_dont_think_mike_is_the_bite_victim/
https://www.reddit.com/r/fivenightsatfreddys/comments/95e9rj/a_response_to_mattpats_timeline_and_reddit_post/ (that one is suuuuuper lengthy though)