That Long Road. · 7:49pm Oct 29th, 2012
Everything that has a beginning, has an end. It is a fate that nothing can escape, and thou there is a finish, it is the journey there that we appreciate. It has now finally happened, with the final chapter now uploaded, My Little Sinner has ended. And even though I am a bit said that the tale has ended, I am also glad. I'm glad that I got a chance to give you, my readers, the story you have come to known as My Little Sinner. It has been quite the ride these past months since I began all the way back in April, and I'm glad I got to share the ride with those that enjoyed MLS. And to those who may read my story in the future, I hope you enjoyed it and were as entertained as those who got to read it as the tale unfolded. And now that my fanfic has finished, it is here that I wish to ask a simple thing for those who would kind enough to give it. I wish to know your final opinion on the ending and MLS as a whole.
To all my readers, thank you all for appreciating my tale. Happy readings and see you in the story.
Why I liked it... no... LOVED it?
- It had a good background story.
- Overpowered OC? Who cares? It had overpowered enemies, so it's alright.
- Romance
- Reminds me of my story. (INSTA LIKE AND FAV.)
- A HUGE adventure. Lot of unexpected things, like Reiku was his father (I literally flipped my shit when I saw that), Rainbow saying 'I love you' like his last girlfriend.
- Enemies became friends.
- A heart breaking scene or more.
- No matter how long it was, you could still make a perfect fight scene, describe a scene. (You don't just say 'Inrei went there and there'. No you say 'Our hero slowly walked somewhere and enjoyed his lunch')
So, I loved it. It's a pity that you don't have that much likes. I hate when OCs don't get that much like. At least there are some other people who likes OCs.
You made a new world. And it's a big thing. It's really hard to make a whole new world, with characters that have normal names, that dragon army. IT ALL MADE SENSE. You explained everything LOGICALLY, not just came up with a random name and said it's 'alright'. Understandable story.
I don't know if you ever make a sequel, but I think it's better as it is. Maybe if you can make a new enemy, new adventure, new... I don't know... a whole new problem for Inrei. Then I would gladly read that. But again, it's good as it is now too.
Now, I'm just gonna stood up and clap for you. Well done!
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I do have plans for a few other stories that can be considered a sequel to My Little Sinner (new protagonists that have had some history with Inrei, while beginning a romantic relationship with the rest of the main six.) *brief spoiler alert for the next plots* While Inrei will be featured in these other stories, his past will be the driving point for Twilight's and Pinkie Pie's protagonists, the tale with Applejack's protagonist will possibly be my first actual clopfic (this fic will be only romance) Rarity's will involve a love triangle, and Fluttershy's....I haven't thought of one for her yet 
Thank you for your final opinion on MLS, I appreciate it
I plan to begin writing either during or after season 3 of MLP, so look forward to it if you wish to see more into the after story of MLS and Inrei's past. As for now, I am to continue more into Sinner. So again, thank you for your comment and happy readings
467738 Your welcome! I will look after your other works. Have a good night!