Chapter 1 Revamp

Hey, everypony! Just giving you all a heads up that the revamps and edits I promised last blog post for the earlier chapters in A Dance Amongst the Stars have begun, starting with A Pocketful of Sunshine. It was my first attempt ever at a fic, and yeah, it kinda showed. What with the copious amounts of grammatical errors and poor paragraph/sentence structure. But with the help of Mystic Cipher and you wonderful people, I feel like I've managed to bring the writing in that first chapter up to snuff with how I am as a writer now. So if you'd like, check out the changes I've made and tell me what you think, but if you don't want to, that's fine as well. No major story changes have been implemented, only a couple of dotted I's and crossed T's. As well as some general housekeeping.

So, thanks for your continued support and I hope you enjoy,
SilentKnight

Comments

[Skye787]

Cool. Glad to hear.