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Foal Star


Just a Brony who writes fun Fanfiction

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  • Friday
    Thoughts on All Bottled Up

    This episode is one that I have mixed feelings about, not that it was terrible, seeing it's one where we have Starlight having issues with Trixie's behavior and bottling it up "literally" while Twilight and her friends are out doing an Escape Room. First, this episode has my favorite song from the entire show."Best friends until the end of time." It's such a fun and catchy song in a somewhat

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  • Thursday
    Thoughts on Celestial Advice

    This is the first time a Season Opener has not had some crisis in Equestria; in fact, it is more of an Epilogue to the ending of Season Six. Overall, I have some mixed feelings about this episode. It's not bad; I think it works, but I feel the impact would have been better if Season Six had been planned out better. First, the plot is about Starlight, Thorax, Discord, and Trixie getting "medals of

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  • 4 weeks
    Eight years

    I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing

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  • 9 weeks
    Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference.

    Season 6

    1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

    2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

    3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

    4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

    5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

    6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

    7th place: No Second Prances

    8th Place: Stranger than Fan Fiction

    9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

    10th place: Viva Las Pegasus

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  • 9 weeks
    To Where and Back again Parts One and Two

    This is the Season Six Finale, and I have to admit this was really good as it did a fantastic job wrapping up the season's main plot points very well and gave us more world-building with the Changelings. I mainly liked how it was centered around Starlight Glimmer, as most of the episodes focused on her dealing with her past and making amends, and this was the ultimate challenge for her not to

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Jun
28th
2018

Im excited for the future · 11:21pm Jun 28th, 2018

I never thought one of my stories would gain so many followers. I just wsnt to say that I appreciate anyone that read it. I have a sequel in mind and I promise to make it longer and more interesting. I hope I can replicate the success and I hope you'll enjoy. Thanks again.

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Comments ( 2 )

It's so hard to pinpoint which story but you've done well in all of your recent works. So you certainly have a lot of reasons to be so proud of yourself for how you are thriving as a writer.

It's been so fun following your work and noticing how much you've improved, and continue to improve, upon your ability to immerse the reader into the tales you weave. You are also not limited to one theme and that says a lot to your abilities. Sure you may have a particular interest / strength but it doesn't keep you from trying new things. Definitely keep it up.

Hurray-hurrah-and-huzzah! :)

Your work is genuinely great. You just keep doing what you're doing, pal!

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