not as good as I wanted it · 6:59pm Jun 28th, 2018
the first few chapters of the rewrite were done but, not how I wanted them. This made me realize that the plot has a number of holes, so, in the meantime, I'm going to put out another story while I hammer everything out. I don't know when but, it will be out.
what holes is your story having?
There is a large lack of explanation where it is needed and too much in other areas, while I was writing I had also come up with better ways to write. When I had done so, it made the chapter confusing. I just need to smooth it out to make it work.