I’m still here. So I’ve been pretty absentee this year with virtually zero writing done having gotten involved in going through my gaming backlog and just working. Also adding a bunch more to my game log this holiday season like Lies of P on PS and Mario RPG on Switch. But one of my New
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To everyone (so far) who has liked/commented/faved/bookshelf · 6:46pm Jun 20th, 2018
or a mix of or all of the above, thank you very much! Writing a one-shot was quite a different experience than writing my epic, but I’m very happy with the way it turned out and I’m glad you enjoyed it! 
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Whinifree · 289 views
· Story: I Hear the Stars
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#one shot
#everyone
#sad
#slice of life
#tempest
#tempest shadow
#grubber
#oc
#other
:)
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*ponemoji*! Uh, I mean
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It’s on hiatus until the editor can get a new computer but I am still writing it in the meantime. I’ve got 5 chs drafted and waiting and I’ve a 6th nearly done.
There were just too many good things about the story. It was well written, ie there was good flow and grammar. (I only noticed a single error in the entire thing, and I’m a stickler for grammar.) The characters were evocative and made me feel the feels. It was a good place for the characters to have gone. It covers a lot of topics like forgiveness and other, more complicated stuff. Overall it was fantastic.
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Many thanks for the feedback.
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I’d have to talk with the original editor about that. He’s been with the story since the beginning and I wouldn’t wanna disrespect him by gettin a temp without talking about it first.
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If worse comes to worse I could let you see the chs unedited.
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Otay.