Bubbly Mare Updated! · 9:55pm Jun 18th, 2018
Added chapter "Honesty Revisited?"
This chapter takes place in the past, while Derpy was still exploring the world... and the world seems to open to her a little more each day. Prior to this Derpy had learned about chores during a rainy afternoon, something she had always wanted for herself, but in getting what we want not only does it open up new things, but eventually... it becomes humdrum, part of everyday life.
Had a bit of trouble with this chapter, pacing mostly as well as incorperating everything I hoped to without padding it out (heh, "padding").There were some parts that flowed together more smoothly, me thinks. This has been a fun story to write, but whole past to present format with little things that carry forth from each is... well, it's proving to be challenging. Glad I'm not creating a trainwreck at least ^^
Anywho, to those who're enjoying this story, thank you for your patience! I've dealt with quite a bit of change over the past few months and I think it's contributing to overall my tapped outness in terms of writing and creating. I also have been taking care of some minor medical stuffs over the past month or so -- turns out that dental clinic I went to last month put in a filling which still had decay under it and fricken broke in under a fortnight. Good news is it was easy to fix, and I also have new glasses which make text a bit easier to see (Kermit the frog goes yay!).
Hope everyone's well, and, to those following it, I you're enjoying this story ]as much as I've enjoyed bringing it to you.
Peace