Easy Go · 2:05pm Jun 10th, 2018
I just posted the most disturbing story I've ever written (depending on the reader).
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It's the first story I've written to get more downvotes than upvotes, and it isn't even close. A T-rated story about foal grooming may have been a miscalculation.
That said, I'm curious how many downvoters actually read the story. I'd wager maybe half of them, but there's no way to know.
Anyway, the irony of being in the feature box with Princess Day at the same time is an intentional one. I have a wide range of content I publish and I like that about myself, though it doesn't sit with some potential readers. I've already lost some followers in the past hour since I posted TftB, but don't worry—if you like some of my work, you'll see similar stories to what you actually enjoyed again in the future. It's just a matter of time.
I liked how you give away the twist pretty early on but still manage to have it be significant when it's revealed later. Good construction.