Speak Chapter 1 Edits and a huge thank you

So RoMS has been the head of the Post Apocalyptic Emporium Discord server, and one day randomly offered to go through the first chapter of Speak to polish it. I know it's always a little risky to fix things you've already done, but about 90% of the fixes he gave me were grammatical (which proves that I did not deserve that A I got in grammar in college), but it helps the story flow and have less interruptions where you are like 'HEARTSHINE THIS IS WRONG WHAT DID YOU DO!?'

I am actively working on chapter 16 as well, and hopefully will have that out soon(TM).
<3 ~Heartshine

Comments

[RoMS]

Thank you for being one of the lifegivers of the sub-fandom.

[Tynal]

Cant wait for chapter 16 X3

[Nero_Swordhunter]

It is certainly nice to have help with this kind of thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[CrustyKing]

Thank you for your hard work! Also, that Blizzard Soon (TM)

[Reese]

Thank you, RealmOfMereShadows!

And thanks for the update, Heartshine.

[nightflyer]

im lookig forward to 16

[Lunarius]

Chapter 16 hype!

[Enkei]

Good news, everypony =)

[AngryShutty]

Thanks c:

[Illuminutter]

Well, time to get on the hype train again.

[Kaipony]

And now to start the constant checking of email for that update notification.