Kind of need some feedback · 8:45pm May 1st, 2018
I have come asking for some feedback and hopefully you all will be willing to answer. First I had originally intended for the cover art for the story to be, this:
However, after some thought I am actually considering doing something else for the cover art, now what I'm going to show you is an uncolored version of the final product, but I thought I might ask you for your feedback on it. 
Admittedly it is inspired by a scene from American Beauty (which I haven't seen but had heard of) with the teacher's weird (and disgusting) fantasy of seeing one of his students lying on a bed of rose petals (because the teacher is a cheating a**hole 
).
Here however, we have Roseate in a dark room, being embraced by her husband's tendrils. Personally I think it could be an interesting cover, but I would like some feedback.
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Next I would like to have a sort of romantic scene between Roseate and Arsthotua, however I'm having a bit of a writer's block with it. Do any of you have any suggestions for a romantic (an platonic) scene that we could have between this lovely couple? Your feedback is welcome.
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I hope you are all having a good day. 
both are good I guess it depends on what you want your story to feel
Not going to lie, it looks amazing, but I keep thinking of tentacle hentai when I look at this. Besides that totally use it for the cover!