Where is Brown Sugar sneaking to? What ever is on her mind? · 6:01pm May 1st, 2018
Do you know what you all deserve? Another preview for my soon-to-be-released fic about Brown Sugar. By the number of views blog entries about her get, I can tell that a lot of you are very interested in reading a story about her and I feel guilty for letting you all wait so much longer than I announced.....
I had to battle a sudden fit of depression and I'm generally still in the process of easing back into writing proper, so I didn't work on it for a few days..... And because it takes so long to finally deliver this fic I'm talking about for almost one year now, you more than deserve another peek at what's to come..... So I present to you another preview!
Here, we have Brown Sugar mysteriously sneaking away from her friends..... What does she have on her mind? What is this filly planning? And what's with all the sand?!
Half an hour later, the group of foals sat in the sandpit together. Each of them having their own space, they quietly worked on sand ponies and massive sand fortresses, fully concentrated on their creations. Brown Sugar was sitting next to Plumberry. Slowly, she shoveled sand into a small, blue bucket in front of her, occasionally peeking over to her friend and the others. As the bucket was full, she turned it around and put it down on the sand again. Carefully, she pulled the bucket up into the air. The tiny sand structure in the bucket's shape that appeared from under it lasted only for a moment, then it collapsed on itself.
“Not again!” Brown Sugar moaned, making sure that it was extra loud so her friends would hear it. “That was the fifth time! The sand is really bad here, I go and try it over there!” She turned around and pointed to the far left of the sandpit.
The response of the other foals was in her favor. “Mhm,” a few of them just said, not even looking at her. Even Plumberry was just nodding, tongue sticking out as she fiercely worked on her sand tower.
Smiling, Brown Sugar got up and trotted away from her own working space. Nopony noticed that she wasn't taking any of the sand toys with her. Instead of shifting to a different spot to build something, Brown Sugar left the sandpit, putting her hooves down quietly to not make any suspicious sounds.
You are going to find out soon what it all means..... There are three more scenes I need to work on; two major, one minor, and I currently reckon with a release next week.
It's also having a very nice wordcount, much more than I thought it would have, and clocking in at about 12,000 words currently, so there will be plenty to read for you once the fic finally arrives in your feeds!
I'll keep you up-to-date and there will be another blog entry about the fic soon!
Looks good to me so far,