Hello Readers! · 5:20pm Oct 26th, 2012
Heya guys. First off, thanks for reading the story.
I've had a lot of fun writing so far but it is so hard to come up with the right words for things! As you may or may not know, this is a first fic for me and I am very much interested in any constructive criticism any one has. I'm always looking to get better.
I have a few questions:
How would you feel about having music links in the story?
Does everything make sense so far?
Have I overlooked/made any big mistakes?
How is the pacing? Too fast/slow?
Do my cliffhangers suck? (I think they are horrible! lol)
These are things that I've agonized over more than the rest (like the lack of *cough*vocabulary) and wanted some feedback on how I'm doing.
I've got some outline work thrown together for chapter six but I was hoping to get some answers back on this before I got too deep into writing it. That way I can go into this chapter with new suggestions in mind.
Anything else you might think of outside of those questions, please mention it. I will not be taking any suggestions on the plot development though.
Also, did you know there are bronies in Greece? I know one, and being the awesome guy that he is, he translated the names of my main characters! yay!
Χειμώνας (Heemonas) = Winter
Λυκόφως (Lee-kO-fos) = Twilight
...Greek looks cool I think, I should use it in WW.
Well, that's all I got, thanks again guys for following.
Sasha
Hallo, I wandered over from The Album and plan to check your story out, though I won't deny with my to read list being kinda mountainous it may tale me a bit
To answer your questions:
How would you feel about having music links in the story?
I think they can work, I don't always click them and I read quite fast so it's a bit of a hit or miss thing. Still they're not bad by any means.
Does everything make sense so far?
Probably?
Have I overlooked/made any big mistakes?
Doubtful?
How is the pacing? Too fast/slow?
Varied?
Do my cliffhangers suck? (I think they are horrible! lol)
*laughs* cliffhangers can be evil but they're not a bad thing.
482428
Well thank you. I hope you get around to Weathering Winter soon, maybe you can give me some more definite answers!
482516 *Goes to read wandering Winter, decides to check new updates, headdeshs at 20 odd stories updating at once* ..... Hokay, I will get to it soon I swear