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Themaskedferret


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Mar
23rd
2018

Speaking of Poetry · 12:30am Mar 23rd, 2018

Several folks posted poems recently

So here's one I just found. I in no way wrote this, I'm not nearly clever or patient enough.

Poem: I lik the form

My naym is pome /and lo my form is fix’d
Tho peepel say /that structure is a jail
I am my best /when formats are not mix’d
Wen poits play /subversions often fail

Stik out their toung /to rebel with no cause
At ruls and norms /In ignorance they call:
My words are free /Defying lit'rate laws
To lik the forms /brings ruin on us all

A sonnet I /the noblest lit'rate verse
And ruls me bind /to paths that Shakespeare paved
Iambic fot /allusions well dispersed
On my behind /I stately sit and wave

You think me tame /
  Fenced-in and penned /bespelled
I bide my time /
  I twist the end /like hell


* “lik” should be read as “lick”, not “like”. In general, the initial section on each line should be read sort of phonetically.

Written for World Poetry Day, March 21, 2018. When I had this idea earlier today, I thought it was the worst, most faux hip pretentious idea for a shallow demonstration of empty wordsmithing skill in poetry ever. So I had to try to write it. I mean, how often do you get to fuse the iambic dimeter ofbredlik- one of the newest and most exciting verse forms - with the stately iambic pentameter of the classic sonnet?

Found here

Comments ( 10 )

Nice work, Ferret! That was quite a good poem.

4822876 Like i said, I didn't write this, I credited the actual author in the blog n_n

4822881
Oh, I know. I just thought it great that you shared it.

4822891 I'll gladly take credit for that n_n

That form is really interesting.

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holy shit, someone legitimized the meme :D

Hap

I don't even know what's happening here.

4823194 Quick, you need to do a blog explaining what's going on in this post.
4824273 needs it stat!

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4825260
Nooooo I don't :B

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