Been Giving It Some Thought

Hey, guys. So, I've been going through my notes and chapters of More Machine Than Man, now called The Dark Warrior, and I've been patching up some errors, namely some issues with line breaks and such. Also, I downed the rating from M to T after seeing what Naruto is able to get away with in terms of violence and gore.

Now, in case you were wondering, the reason I initially scraped the project was because I had written myself into a corner with it, and I had planned on sending even more Displaced there. However, after giving it some thought, I decided to give the Crystal Empire's swords resistance to lightsabers, and instead of having Displaced being summoned, I decided to cash in on something that was used in the Star Wars canon: King Sombra lures several Sith Lords and Dark Jedi into some portal or other, who feel as though they were being called by something, ie Sombra, and fall under his control. I don't know, it's a work in progress, but I do know that I don't want to play the displaced card.

Any thoughts, or suggestions?