Saving Equis Edits are Coming. · 6:04am Dec 21st, 2017
Hello readers and followers,
With the rapid pace I have been posting chapters edits have been few and far between, after some reviewing I have decided to do a major edit from beginning to end. Keeping that in mind, this is the post to please tell me what you find particularly off, jarring, or what you really like. I will be taking it all in for consideration. Hopefully the finished product is better than what it is now.
Once a chapter has been edited I will mark it with a '*' and it would be most appreciated if feedback could be given on the changes made.
Planned changes include: more backstory, more talking, and possibly more Faust. Although that last one is still up in the air, not sure if anyone really wants to know what he is doing behind the scenes.
On another note there is two new stories in the work for 2018:
1) 'Enchanting the Siren.' - a interesting look into how Adiago Dazzle found her stallion, mostly romance and a little SOL, with the expected ending that leads to Equestria Girls world.
2) 'Twilight's Sex Ed Classes.' - it's a pretty self explanatory short comedy. A side story that didn't make it into 'Saving Equis'.
Glad to see thatside story of adiago but i still hope for a family reunion to happen in the maun story
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Yes, that is coming. Final arc, also known as the arc I am racing like mad to get to. Soo much to do.
Thank you for the interest
To be honest, I haven’t seen to many. A few spelling mistakes here and there but not to the point that it ruined my reading and not enough of them for me to feel like I needed to point them out.
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I can agree, the unedited work is better than my edited work. That's awesome.
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Cool then here to a nice and hopefully long story