Dec
13th
2017
Need Help making Horror Crossovers · 2:47am Dec 13th, 2017
I did attempted to do a crossover between MLP and The Purge but I had more "dislikes" than "likes" all in one day. So, may I ask JUST WHAT PART OF THE PURGE CROSSOVER DO MOST PEOPLE DISAGREE WITH? I just wanted to see how will the Mane 6 brave the Purge in Equestria. 
I'm having the story revoked for now and I won't put it back up until I can get some answers for question from above. And also not until I can find a way to improve the chances of getting more "likes" than "dislikes" for this Purge crossover story.
Problem with taking it down is that I can't see what you need help with. I didn't read it quite yet and I would've loved to help.
4747428
Okay then, I'll start recreating the story. But this time, I need someone to proofread it first before I submit it.
4747527 I can help! Sometimes, dislikes can also be because of pacing or OOC behavior.
My main problem with it is how the princesses just roll over and let it happen so easily and it was hard to tell whether those false NFFE (New Founding Fathers of Equestria) were either bluffing of unleashing the Purge elsewhere or really meant it as for the threat to be real, they had to have sleeper agents all over Equestria for the threat to be carried out.
The so-called Purge would go against everything Equestria stands for and all it is just like the Purge trilogy is genocide against the NFFE sees unfit to live like the poor and homeless to even members of the government itself (anyone who saw or knows about the third Purge film would know) that it would ultimately be the downfall of the group and Equestria itself.
The NFFE likely caused the situation at Manehatten to happen as a power ploy to seize control of the Equestria government with the end goal of putting themselves in power and eliminating the monarchy and any pony they like I said before unfit to live.
The idea of the Purge in of itself is absurd and dumb as once you take away laws (which are the only thing aside from Police Officers between Order and Chaos), people or ponies in this case revert to an animalistic way of acting that they won't snap back to normal after it 12-hour period ends.
What's to stop those NFFE from doing the same atrocities as the New Founding Fathers of America from the Purge Trilogy itself? From kidnapping ponies and selling them at high prices to be killed in one-sided slaughter fests to ordering Death squads to keeping the numbers at a certain level.
I'm sorry efug25g, but this is one story that I find the most despicable and dreadful crossover I've ever laid my eyes on.
In the end, there are just some crossovers that are never meant to be made and this sadly, is one of them.
Good day my sir.
4749037
Well, what kind of Horror Crossover would you prefer??
4749087
Oh, just a few like the video game Dead Space, the video game DOOM (2016 version), and I Am Legend (Will Smith version). I'm not a real big horror buff.
Three words....
We.... are.... AMERICANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In a way this could have been a great story idea, but the way that you execute it is just extremely disasterous.