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pabrony


A broke(n) artist and writer.

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  • 231 weeks
    Extremely Important Announcement...

    I'm just going to keep this as simple as possible. After January 2nd, I will be on an indefinite hiatus to deal with some personal demons. I'm not sure exactly how long this will last but rest assured, I do plan to be back whenever I'm done.

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  • 235 weeks
    Coming Soon...

    For those wondering, I'm still here and I'm still writing stories. Just with work, art commissions, and the holiday season, the stories have slowed to a crawl. But fear not, Saturday will be the release of the next chapter of Home For The Holidays. So get ready for more magical baby hijinks later this week.

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  • 236 weeks
    Kinda Strange...

    Tonight at midnight EST, I'll be on twitch streaming Life Is Strange. I'll be doing a "Max Is A B*tch" stream, which is all the choices that make Max seem like an ass. Check it out at www.twitch.tv/pabrony83

    0 comments · 567 views
  • 239 weeks
    Dear Google...

    When placing random ads before videos on YouTube, please keep in mind that an ad is NOT five minutes long. An ad is normally fifteen seconds to two minutes at the most.

    Thank you.

    10 comments · 615 views
  • 239 weeks
    Oh, Yeah...

    I also forgot to mention in my last post that the newest installment of the SciTwi Shimmer Chronicles is now up and ready for the viewing. Enjoy.

    THome For The Holidays
    Sunset and Twi head to Equestria with the twins.
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Nov
24th
2017

Late Night Thinking... · 7:54am Nov 24th, 2017

...sucks. Yesterday I went and read through the SciTwi Shimmer Series and started thinking about combining them into one story with revisions. Not sure if that would be allowed so I'll have to message one of the admins to find out.

What's y'all's opinion? Should I do it if it's allowed?

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Comments ( 7 )

If they don't approve, you can usually get away with just adding the later parts to the first story. But can I suggest maybe making it into two stories, rather than one? Because 4 and onward are a huge shift in tone from 1-3, and kind of jarring if you aren't expecting it (Kind of jarring even if you are, to be honest).

4733838
True, I also feel the suisidasuicidal tone of 1-3 is vastly different from the clop/romance that is 4-6, and they should be different story's.

4733838, 4734164 Y'all make a good point on that. Keep in mind that this was just an idea caused by reading + insomnia so I'm not even sure I'd go through with it.

4734171
Yeah, probably not a good Idea.

4734179 You're probably right.

4734171
I do think it would be more effective as one (or two) story, but if the story is finished it's probably better to leave it alone.

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