Spiders and Magic: Update

Hey guys. As I have heard and I suppose you have also heard from Maximus report, that the entire Spiders and Magic series would be reconsider and undergoing a rewrite. I would like to present my very own suggestions what kind of changes the possible rewrite could bring or how it would look like:

About the Part I: Rise of Spider-Mane, the story is so unique, perfect and so much sophisticatedly written that there would be not much to rewrite or change. However, I guess the changes could be like these:

1) The chapters "The eyes in the back of his head", Peters memories would be added with some more, like the time when dr. Curt Connors had an accident and transformed into Lizard in a Spiderman 3 official game style, Spidey having some of funny moments like putting himself a spare Fantastic Four costume along with a paper bag on his head as a Bombastic Bag-Man, meeting and facing Punisher, along with fighting off Venom then adding to facing Cletus Kasady, aka Carnage, and finaly, the best part of all.....Meeting up and unfortuantelly also fighting with "Wolverine", yet also having so many adventures and team up with the grumpy canadian mutant, not to mention actually playing his great part in the final chapters and helping out Spiderman, Twilight, Luna and the gang to take down Osborn during their final showdown.

2) I know it might sound crazy, but what about some of Peters new friends from Equestria like Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, or even Trixie going along with him, Twilight, Spike and Luna on Earth, also gaining a human forms and aiding their firned in their fight against Osborn?

3) Before pernamently leaving back into Equestria with his friends and family, I guess Peter just could before say some farewell and making amends and peace some of his old acquaintances, like Flash Thompson for an example, a bully that had been bulling Peter from the middle school and especially no one else than J Jonah Jameson himself, an irascible publisher of Daily Bugle who hated the hero ever since mere beginning, using a smear campaigns agaisnt him a accusing him to be a menace and a fraud to a society, as the odl flattop might finally have some change of heart. Maybe.

About part II and III, there would not be anything for a change. Queens Chrysalis reforming and turning to good intact.

The Part IV however and on the other hand is something a way different. And I am glad and probably you are guys, that Maximus took it down in order to undergo a serious rewrite. Come to think of it, when I was reading it first a year ago, at first I thought nothing about it and thinking that it was just as great as the other three stories. But thought, lately I also realized and also grow to be quite....dissapointed.

1) Peter suffering so much stress and enduring lots of physical and emotional pain lately, being plagued by nightmares about his traumatic timetraveling experience into alternate post-apocalyptic future, nearly being consumed and destroyed by his own guilt and failures, as well as slowly falling into darkness and enventually being once again possed by Nightmare Moon. This whole story just seems a way little too dark, creepy and sad. (Though, credit for Maximus as he actually worked the story out in a version of the original animated series in a style of "Neo genetic nightmare" when Peter was slowly mutating inton a Man-Spider. At least that.)

2) Adaigos, Arias and Sonatas involvement in this whole mes. Three sirends who are the last of their kind. I mean seriously.....Adaigo and Aria both dying during and at the end of the story, leaving only Sonata alive as the last remaining siren in the history....No offence but it just doesnt seem right, but rather very bittersweat and unreal as a proper ending of the story at all.

3) Luna still remaing in her "puny", younger and significantly weaker form for the entire run. Some one would even expect that she would actually restore her full power and returning into her former self. I dont know what about you, but I honestly and frankly liked her much better that way.

4) But worst of all and telling you the truth guys, it was the greatest blow eve for me.......Princess Celestias death! This event literally broke my heart and even plaguing my heart and mind for a couple of days and even and nearly being on a verge of cry. No offence, but killing one the main characters of MLP friendship is magic, it would like killing the entire series itself.

(And that is exactly the reason, when I started writing my very own story on fimfiction about Spiders and Magic, the spin-off: The Harmony Avengers, occuring exactly three years after Peters timetravelling experience and prioer three more years earlier before part IV, because Spiders and Magic universe along with MLP Friendship is Magic "without Princess Celestia was totally and without question UNACCEPTABLE for me!"

So.....At least and just like that.

But that is just me and a mere opinions and views from my side how the possible rewrite could look like. But as I know Maximus, I believe he will make it just right and perfect. And also hope that his health will steadily improve, getting much better and also finding an inspiration for his writing once again.

Honestly, Spiders and Magic, the Rise of Spider-Mane, is frankly my the most favority crossover story I have ever read, either on fanfiction or here on fimfiction. And I merely found it justa year before and just couldnt help but reading the stories regularly even into a late night time. I wonder, if it even could have its own movie version one day, or as a direct-to-video movie?

Yet hough.....I only wish he could finally write and release that long promised "House of Parker" spin-off and series of one-shots and drabbles about Peter, Twilight and all member of the herd.

Ohh....And just one more little thing:

As Maximus mentioned at 19 th April report, that the Part IV would be the "end of Peter Parkers run in Equestria" and just wanted it to end. Probably some of you might think that Peter might actually die this time, And thoughj even l cant be too sure, but I am strongly convinced that Peter WILL NOT die on the end. Here are several reasons:

1) Peter is the main protagonist of Spiders and Magic series. So if he died, the entire series would actually by worthless and like it would actually never be wrote on the first place and crumble down like a castle build from cubes, dont you think?

2) Peter has Twilight, a beloved and supportive wife, two children Mayday and Little Ben who was just born recently, his Aunt May who had always been a mother figure to him, lots of great not to mention two very best friends Trixie and Luna, he is an addopted and honorary member of Apple Family, a mentor and bi brother to Cutie Mark Crusader and above all having a better and great life in Equestria.

3) He has formed a new Web of Life in Equestria consisting from the close ones that became attached to him so much, while the old one back on Earth broke down. So, if Peter died, it would eventually by like in the third sequel Days of the Friendship Past all over. Without Peter, everything would fall apart with Twilight, Mayday, Aunt May, Trixie and especially Luna couldnt event imagine a life without Peter.

4) What if? and the Alternate universe stories like Equestrian Avengers as well as upcomming House of Parker would also by worthless and could never be wrote without Peter as a central character.

5) Peter is way more loveable and popular character as Spiderman/Spider-Mane then to be killed off. Not to mention being one of the most popular, titular and long-standing superhero in Marvel

6) In part IV, on the alternate Earth, Peter even met up with Stan Lee himself, the guy who created Spiderman and even giving some encouraging words and motivation to a young man to never loose the fate in himself. It was more likely he actually knew Peter was Spiderman. Which by the way, actually isnt far from truth. But you know what I mean.

And besides, I think that Maximus statement about "This will be the end of Peter Parkers run in Equestria" might have been misunderstood. It is something like with 2012 of Mayen prophecy about the end of the Mayen calendar and some people thought that by that the world as we know it would eventually come into the END. However, it actually didnt happen after all. Some expert If I remember that correctly stated that the end of the calendar doesnt necessarily means the end of the world. The Mayens would that way merely throw out the old one and replacing it with a new one. No end of the wolrd.

And I also guess the same thing will happen in the rewrite, that Peter definitelly WONT die at the end. As I have stated before, Spiders and Magic just wouldnt be worth and having no meaning without its central character.