Proof-reader, editor and general feedback needed

So, as I draw near to posting an update on my latest story ( Fallout: Equestria- Tales of Service ), I must ask for some help. If anyone would like to help me as either a Proof-reader, an Editor or can point me to someone to help me with that would be appreciated.
If you are unable to do any of that don't worry; I could always use feedback to improve in the future. Doesn't even have to be good news, just as long as the comment section doesn't become a war zone. Bear in mind Offencive comments (Such as racial slurs) will be deleted.
If you are interested, send me a PM. Thank you and have a very nice day