I'm crazy... · 8:40pm Sep 21st, 2017
Because i, getting ready to throw my hat in the ring for the FlutterDash Contest #4 and I still havent heard about the others I am in. Plus revisions, two chapters left in On the Inside and ramping some tensions in Insurgence in xconjunction with moving (tonight is the last night in my old place, :( #notsad).
So please be patient with me the next few weeks.
While in on the subject, a box with eight textbooks strained the limits of my strength taking it down to the van, butva box with 70 novels didn't? What do they make texts out of, lead?
But updates: final chapter is in works. Adding a scene of the Twilights playing with Flurry Heart and changing up the farewells so Sunny's sisters don't run into the Mane 6, thereby fixing a continuity problem. Also allows for a little more expansion with dialogue before the final goodbyes.
Up next: Got a Minute? - AJ sits Sunset down to make sure shes not misplacing feelings for one Twilight onto the other. I may do this as an add to the final chapter, or maybe more of a solo story. Cast your votes here!
I think it might be better having Got A Minute as an additional chapter instead. You could do Sunset's viewpoint of how the date goes and then have the sitdown with Applejack occurring the next day where Sunset reaffirms that her feelings are completely centred on Sunshine. Then, to cap things off, you could end the story with Sunset going to meet Sunshine or maybe have Sunshine arrive just after the conversation is over and Sunset goes with her.