Nearing the home stretch · 12:36pm Sep 17th, 2017
I just did editing on the chapter where the SciSet actually admits to each other. It's not the final version, but I can't think of much else to do outside of maybe a little more expansion of the talk with Cadence and a little more interaction with the family at the beginning. I'll let you familiar with the old version give your thoughts. Dave_Bryant, BlackWater, IndigoMoon, Wolfkin, BenRG, MySisterBroughtMeHere, and AJtheRaven, I'd be particularly interested in your thoughts before I move on.
The next chapter, the one with the Wonderbolts show, is going to remain mostly unchanged beyond my grammatical fixes and such. I am likely to remove the song from the story itself to lend the title to a completely different reason. It will still get a little expansion but not much will be different. There will be another expansion to the final chapter that will show the lunch and the portrait being taken and cement the reason why Morning Glory hadn't thought she had met Rarity in Wooing, thereby fixing that little plot hole.
So that leaves me with the final question. How does this benefit the quality of my Homecoming continuity? Have I destroyed conceptions or merely opened the window a little wider? Was this a bad idea? I still have the pre-revision copies, just so you know....
Oh, also a new chapter snuck in there and a new chapter for On the Inside as well. Cheers!