Story: Dawn - Chapter 4 & 5 are finally edited! · 8:23pm Aug 17th, 2017
Hello my dear readers and everypony in between,
I can finally tell you that Chapters 4 & 5 are proofread now. 
It needed a lot of time, but thanks to "Javarod" (Thank you so much!) the chapters have now 40% more grammar! OK, I'm not THAT bad, but you know what I mean. So this message goes to all who had problems with the grammar and the spelling of words. I really hope you are satisfied now.
The future chapters (and every chapter in general) will be edited in time as well and I just wanted to tell you how you can find that out in case some of you didn't notice it in the chapters 1-3. I always write at the top of the Author's Note the name of the proofreader and the date when the edited version is uploaded and replaced the "my-version". Very easy to identify... the grammar is much better. 
It was sometimes really annoying when I saw on google doc what kind of errors I made And I fear it won't be much better in the near future, maybe with time I can get better, but I'm learning. That's good... 
And I want to thank you all for your support and your great feedback! No matter if it could be considered as "negative critic" or "positive critic". What I like the most is that most critics were actually really helpful and I saw that people had the honest intention to help, for what I'm very grateful. No senseless flaming, no insults, only constructive criticism (for the most port, like 9/10).
202 likes to 21 dislikes, 2,5k views, and from what I saw two times featured. 🙃
I never thought that I could write a story as a complete newbie on FIM in the author faction that would make it this far. Your support is very much appreciated and I hope I'll can give you joy, laughter, excitement and other positive things in the future with my stories and future chapters of Dawn.
Best regards,
Anachronon
