Updatin'

Okay, by now you all probably want some sort of sign that I'm actually getting the ball rolling here. I'm happy to report that I've finished two chapters thus far, and we're looking at roughly 14'000 words, including mapping notes (which would account for around 500). My plan for the story now is to have five total chapters: An intro that gets the initial apology and setting out of the way, a chapter dedicated to Gilda screwing around with Rainbow, a chapter dedicated to Gilda screwing around with Pinkie, a chapter involving Gilda and a herm-endowed Fluttershy, and then a bonus chapter involving a straight up foursome between all of them.

I say the fifth chapter is a bonus because I'm not sure if I'll write that before submitting the first four, or at all. I'm somewhat worried that by that point the sex scenes will get a little stale, also I've never been amazing at focusing on more than two people going at it. It's tough since you have to make sure one isn't just masturbating in the background while there's a clear focus point between two characters.

Anyways, I'm actually pretty happy with how it's turning out thus far. I figured out a way to indulge in my obsession of macking a back story for this alternate anthro-questria without it hogging the spotlight. After Gilda has some fun with the cast, they share a little afterglow moment to just talk and recharge. I use these opportunities to have her discuss things like the EPOW and her desires to make things right with the town. In this revised take on the story, she hadn't gone through with her apologies yet, as Rainbow invites her straight to the cottage later that night instead of lunch. Sneaking in little tid-bits about the world this way is good since it occurs after the sex and at the very end of the chapter, so people can skip to the next one if they're not interested.

I'm not too certain on when it'll be complete. Optimally, I want it done before the end of December, as the story takes place during the winter in Equestria. We'll just have to see though. Some days I'm really in to it and can scribble down a thousand words, and other days I can't bring myself to do much more than edit and reread. What I do know is that this thing will be finished. I stopped having doubts about how to link events together, and I've got the story all mapped out in my head and in writing. I'm going to finish this story and I'll finally be able to move on to other projects without worrying about this one.

Also I moved my stories to dropbox recently, so anyone who wanted to read the versions currently posted on fimfiction can just ask for a link or use the download button to salvage them. They won't be here forever.

Here's a little excerpt for your patience :3

“Ohh,” Rainbow beamed as she came to a conclusion. “Is that what all this was about? Does the little gryph get turned on by taller ponies?” She finally yanked her shirt up, exposing her notable boobs shrouded by a sports bra.

When she rose the clothing high enough to uncover her eyes, Dash stumbled back, for her friend now stood less than an arm’s length away from her, studying her chest. “Well, you did get taller.” Gilda then jutted her arms out and groped her friend’s bosom. “Where’d these babies come from anyhow? You were still being mistaken for a dude last time we hung out.”

Rainbow wanted to comment on her unreal speed. Gilda was standing by the door while Dash pulled her shirt off, and she didn’t hear any paw steps before the gryphon seemingly teleported in front of her. Perhaps she’d awakened something in the hybrid, a lusty, grabby ‘something’ that Rainbow felt she liked very much.

Weakly, as Gilda played with her tits enough to draw a moan, Rainbow shot back, “You’re one to talk, Double G.”

“H, actually,” Gilda smirked. Her breasts couldn’t seem to calm down throughout flight school, making it to plush, shirt straining E’s when Rainbow left. The absence of her best friend hardly made her growth settle down.

Take care.