Make it More Like "Fall OF Equestria" · 8:38am Aug 2nd, 2017
So someone in the comments of "The Council of Chaos" said it felt a little like Fall Of Equestria. I actually like this idea a lot given the kind of world GTA: Warped takes place in. So what favorite elements of the Fall Of Equestria world would you like to see in the fic? If you choose everything, gimme ideas anyways as I'm not so familiar with it as others probably are.
I have an idea, but it would only work if Spike is corrupted as well. Is he? It's been a while since I read the first chapter, and I can't be sure if he was even mentioned. If he is corrupted, maybe he could have some sort of hyper-aphrodisiac semen. Cums in a mare one time, and they're his sex slaves for life. It's just a suggestion, of course, but seeing as no one else has yet to reply, it's the best suggestion you have been given.
Also, I'd love to see Ember somewhere in the story. Ember is Best Dragon.
4621313
I'm still determining whether or not to have Spike even in the GTA series. So far he's not though I am curious as to how he'll interact with Sterling.
4621586
Well, it's never too late. But the you would have to come up with some way to explain why he isn't in the story yet.
Also, why didn't you include him in the first part? You included Cadence and Shining Armor, and have even included Starlight more recently. But no Spike.
4621674
I hated Spike when I wrote GTA 1. But he became a better character in the show after and now I don't mind him.