New Story Coming Soon (Published)

EDIT: The story has been published, and can be found here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381164/crime-and-punishment-rewrite-clean-version

So, I kinda did this spur of the moment. I was reading a story and thought 'wow, the first chapter's so good, but then it probably devolves into pointless gore and disgusting stuff judging by the tags. I can do better than this.' So, with the author's permission, I rewrote his story.

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Crime and Punishment (Rewrite/Clean Version)

Applejack and Big Macintosh have been romantically involved since before Applejack's first heat, but Applejack had always been careful that their sexual relations didn’t result in a foal.

One day however, when Applejack was feeling particularly naughty and deep in her heat, she convinces Big Mac to give her a foal, despite knowing the punishments of such if she's caught carrying a foal born of incest.

It would have worked too, if not for Apple Bloom catching them a subsequent rutting session many months later. Caught and reported, now they have to face the punishment...or do they?

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After reading the first chapter and only a portion of the second (before things got too...unpleasant) of headless_rainbow's story Crime and Punishment (WARNING: linked story contains GRAPHIC TORTURE, GENITAL MUTILATION, FORCED ABORTION OF A 10-MONTH-ALONG FOAL(MURDER), AND GORE), I saw what potential this story had to be a nice (mostly) happy little story of lessons learned instead of a gorefest.