Amendment · 1:29pm Oct 9th, 2012
The narrative has been revised to remove Marity and Rarintosh from the prose. Those identifications are only used by the characters, and I can see how this adds clarity.
Be not afraid, chapters are coming, just slowly. The character script for chapters 4-7 (maybe an 8th?) is coming along.
>chapters are coming, just slowly
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