Jul
15th
2017
Small edits... · 10:22am Jul 15th, 2017
A friend just got into reading KAPT, and noticed some issues with it...
Apparently I had started describing Pearl with a grey coat, due to her attempt to get close to a mother-of-pearl tone, only to then describe her as a green pony in later chapters...
So that's fixed.
There were a few spelling errors and some grammar she pointed out, so those are fixed...
...and I'm still without a proper (p)reviewer/editor who could have saved me this embarrassing moment. 
