Just a Quick Update, and a Request for Your Opinion. · 5:50pm Oct 8th, 2012
For anyone who hasn't seen my comment, I will post it here:
Sorry it hasn't been updated in a while. I got a little stuck while trying to think of the second chapter, so I've taken a couple of weeks to not write anything and just think about it a bit. In the last couple of days I've had a bit of a breakthrough, I'm about to start writing again. It should be done at some point, I don't really know when, but hopefully soon. I haven't time the past couple of nights to work on it though.
Other than that, I would like your opinion on something. I'm considering converting my story to past tense, instead of present. I feel I have think too hard on what words I use, instead of just writing what comes naturally. I would only do the next chapter and so forth, but I think it needs consistency. What are your thoughts on this? did you like how it was written? Do you think I should change it? Are you indifferent?
Well, I kinda like it in present tense... But that's just me. Do what you wish, as long as you keep writing.
410175 If people actually like it, I'll probably keep it, it's not that big of a deal. But all of the comments I got on the actual story about it cited it as "weird", so I just assumed everyone thought that.
That would be up to you. Personally, I'm not quite sure, honestly how that would affect it, other than fixing consistency issues. There might be less issues converting to present tense, but without doing one or the other, you won't know. I'm not a writer, by any means, but i'm always happy to lend an opinion. I personally don't have any preference, beyond sharing your thought of seeing some consistency.
410192 If what you meant was write it in past tense, then convert it to present, I might do that. If that wasn't what you meant, thanks for the idea anyway!
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It wasn't exactly what i meant, but you're welcome for the unintentional idea. I admit... That was weirdly worded, but you seemed to have gotten part of what i meant to say. What i meant to say was choose one or the other, but stick with it, in a nutshell. Kind of.
Even i'm confused by what i typed earlier. I don't have any context on what i was thinking either, so it's original meaning is lost. I'll go with what you thought, giving you the idea then. *shifty look* And don't let anyone say otherwise! *chuckle* Ah, i can't even type that with a straight face.