Story Preview · 5:47am Jul 7th, 2017
From atop the hill, Twilight could see her friends fighting alongside her brother but was barely able to recognize them.
Applejack had been viciously hacking away at anything that dared to come near her and her twin axes while Rainbow Dash swung her spear to and fro, cutting several throats open.
"So..." the princess said quietly to herself.
"This is war."
Hmm id use a tittle along the lines like.
This Is War!
To the Soldier, The Civilian, The Martyr, The Victim!
Not a bad idea, but what verse is this caribou, griffon war, solar and lunar civil war?
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It's pretty obvious in the story it's linked to.
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Thought u were starting a fresh story idea.
Honestly its a good concept, have her awoken to the screams of terror of caribou attacking their camp, and she is forced to take a caribou's life to save chrysalis.
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Hm. Maybe next time I'll put "Chapter" Preview
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Its not a bad idea, just where are you going to take twilight in this, she doesnt seem the type to kill.
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Still brainstorming that.
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Well good luck to you, i like this story.