Rewrite #3 · 10:22am Jul 4th, 2017
Third rewrite for the next chapter, Prey, is currently in progress.
My muse has been extremely stingy lately and as a result it has taken far longer than I feel it should to squeeze out something comparatively simple. I am still committed to remaining narratively and militarily sound in my writing. Trying to do that alongside keeping everyone in character -- development and all -- is difficult, especially for such a long-running story.
Let's hope this round of rewrites is sufficient to build something on.
You'll get it this time.